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No one ever asks why all of the sirens sing their song
sailors ships follow the stars without wondering what's wrong
my piercing notes are heard far above the dangerous waves
in which the drowning men do not escape their judgment day
I'm alone with just my thoughts for my freedom I'll await
but when if they see the rocks they quickly turn the other way
I hope that if I bring them here I'll have some company
my harmless efforts always somehow turn to tragedy
I've been here for eternity please someone help me out
The roaring waves block out all sound so you can't hear me shout
so I sing from pain hoping someone will help me escape
if I am trapped and sailors leave then maybe they should pay
So many years of passing ships but still to no avail
am I that insignificant or do you just not care
I matter too, start listening when I reach out and plea
or soon you will regret that you had ever ignored me
Now are you happy you've enraged me left me all alone
while you go right back to your king who sits upon his throne
If that is how it's going to be then you've chosen your fate
I will sing over the waves to ensure you won't escape
I have been singing the same song for years, its been too long
look here comes another ship but someone else came along
is that the king Odysseus I see tied to the post
he looks so ridiculous as he edges towards my coast
I sing my song to drown the king but the ropes held him back
the sailors can not hear my song with their ears blocked with wax
victorious they sail to Ithica as I fade away
finally my freedom's come I no longer have to stay
This is so pretty omg, I absolutely love the way you wrote this. Putting a different perspective on the sirens songs and the tale of Odysseus really changes the experience!
ReplyDeleteExcellent and beautifully written! Great study of perspective!
ReplyDeleteI like this format and think it is really well written!
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