This time is gonna be different. I think I told her I loved her too soon, I didn’t mean to freak her out, she just looked so beautiful in that moment I couldn’t help myself. I had promised myself I wouldn’t be weird about it, she’s just so lovely to look at. One time she almost caught me staring, which would’ve been awkward considering we were only on date three at that point. I don’t know what it is, I just can’t help looking at pretty things, that’s what the human eye was meant to do, gaze upon those worth gazing upon. A poet probably said that once. But no matter, I really wanted it to work out this time because my last relationship before her ended really poorly. We had a good thing going, it was my mistake to try to plan a date on Halloween. There were too many people walking around, I should’ve known it wouldn’t have panned out as I planned. But that’s in the past now, and so is this new one now. I take the blame for the downfall of the first relationship but this one was really her fault. If only she hadn’t screamed, I couldn’t risk the neighbors hearing her. She ruined it this time and she had to suffer the consequences. But it’s alright, I already found a nice condo on Perry St with a Stacy Jackson who’s majoring in nursing at Michigan State. This time is gonna be different.
Yikes- this is a little creepy!
ReplyDeleteThis was very well written. I like the twist at the end.
ReplyDeleteThis was very creative and well written.
ReplyDeleteI was a little lost at first because I thought you were taking about a personal experience! But honestly you did a great job with this:)
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